I propose you go for 99's instead. While it sounds kind of impressive to have 90 in a skill, you're still missing over half the exp for a 99. Just get yourself maxed, it does come with a way better reward than getting 90s in every skill.
As far as the video itself goes, first off get a different recording software. One without a watermark. I recommend OBS. I don't like the intro, it doesn't have anything to do with the video and just fills up 10 seconds of time. I would like to see more progress in a single video, putting all your level gains in some sort of montage isn't a bad idea, especially since some of your levels aren't that high and you'll get a level fairly often. If you do go for 99s isntead you can easily throw in slayer tasks and show some loot for extra footage.
Sorry if I'm overly critical on your first video, I do hope to see more from you.