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Offline Rotanas

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loot from 10 hours from glacors
« on: November 01, 2017, 05:31:53 pm »
« Last Edit: November 02, 2017, 10:00:38 pm by Jandar »
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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #1 on: November 01, 2017, 06:43:19 pm »
Juicy!

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #2 on: November 02, 2017, 09:04:10 pm »
Nice that you're making more videos.

Does it hurt to check for mistakes in your writing though?

You managed to make 4 mistakes in the single sentence you wrote. You misspelled "before", you forgot to capitalize "I" twice and "go" should be "went to".

You're also zoomed out a tad bit far, it's not an issue if you watch on fullscreen but I don't tend to do that.
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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #3 on: November 02, 2017, 09:34:35 pm »
Nice that you're making more videos.

Does it hurt to check for mistakes in your writing though?

You managed to make 4 mistakes in the single sentence you wrote. You misspelled "before", you forgot to capitalize "I" twice and "go" should be "went to".

You're also zoomed out a tad bit far, it's not an issue if you watch on fullscreen but I don't tend to do that.
trust me i spend 3 hours with new recording and editing software to make this damn vid i was tired and angry.
yes it fucking hurt to check mistakes at that time. im not from englant and my translator making much more illogical mistakes than me.
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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #4 on: November 02, 2017, 09:43:54 pm »
Just from creating videos/keeping community alive - you deserve a credit.

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #5 on: November 02, 2017, 10:06:24 pm »
Nice gloves. Good luck on Ragefire gloves.

Ps. Your ironman rocks!

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #6 on: November 02, 2017, 10:10:00 pm »
I was tired and angry, I spent 3 hours with new recording and editing software to make this damn vid.
It fucking hurts to check mistakes sometimes. I'm not from England and my translator making many more illogical mistakes than me.
I wouldn't mind checking your writing before you upload if that's something you'd like.

I don't think it's an excuse that you're not speaking your native language. English is my third language. It's a matter of being willing to learn and taking the time to correct your mistakes. It doesn't take more than a few minutes. Not to mention the more you do it the more you won't have to, as writing correctly starts becoming a habit the more you do it. You shouldn't rely on a translator, they're not properly programmed to have correct grammar.

What software are you using if I may ask?
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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #7 on: November 02, 2017, 10:44:41 pm »
Nice that you're making more videos.

Does it hurt to check for mistakes in your writing though?

You managed to make 4 mistakes in the single sentence you wrote. You misspelled "before", you forgot to capitalize "I" twice and "go" should be "went to".

You're also zoomed out a tad bit far, it's not an issue if you watch on fullscreen but I don't tend to do that.
trust me i spend 3 hours with new recording and editing software to make this damn vid i was tired and angry.
yes it fucking hurt to check mistakes at that time. im not from englant and my translator making much more illogical mistakes than me.

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #8 on: November 03, 2017, 10:50:40 am »
i definitely admire the dedication you put in your goals. you could use a little bit more practice at pvming, for example at ice demons. You don't necessarily need to move every time the ice demon starts his hail special attack, you can just switch to protect mage and it'll completely deflect all the damage from the special attack. Before editing your video ask someone with more english  language knowledge to fix your mistakes.
other than that, a pretty nice video.

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #9 on: November 03, 2017, 06:15:34 pm »
Well done, keep it up
"The strongest among you is the one who controls his anger."

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Re: loot from 10 hours from glacors
« Reply #10 on: November 04, 2017, 09:13:22 am »
i definitely admire the dedication you put in your goals. you could use a little bit more practice at pvming, for example at ice demons. You don't necessarily need to move every time the ice demon starts his hail special attack, you can just switch to protect mage and it'll completely deflect all the damage from the special attack. Before editing your video ask someone with more english  language knowledge to fix your mistakes.
other than that, a pretty nice video.
i know that you must switch on mage protection when ice demons start special atack.
i got ice crown that last rare item from ice demons, i start dont care about pvm quality, after 5 sec i tele away.
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