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Showcase / playing around on my spare time
« on: September 06, 2015, 09:34:00 pm »
It aint perfect, but its my first, gonna do some more soon.
Watcha think guys?
Watcha think guys?
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Haha I swear you took the words out of my mouth!Welcome back, Dylan!fixed
We have spoke ingame already but yeah... Postcount
>7/14 of replies are talking about the theme; 2/14 of replies are entries, 1/14 replies is about breasts; 3/14 replies are baes; 1/14 replies is an example of poor reasoning.
>Topic is a conversation about breasts.
You may be wrong, but you have brought a pressing concern to the forefront: We aren't discussing buubanies enough!
>1/15 replies is an epiphany :doge:
I was evaluating every entry by specific criteria. Depth, lighting, flow and overall concept are the main things in signatures. Overall concept includes: Text/Render blending/effects/color scheme etc.
Kluke:
Lighting - Whole piece is way too bright, would love to see more contrasted version, to improve lighting on your designs, trying working more on reflections, light sources/effects, try to imagine how the light coming from a light source would be hitting the render.
Flow - All of the C4D's just seem to be thrown in there randomly without any effort on arranging them to work with focal. (please correct me if I'm wrong)
Depth - I can see some blurred BG parts, which is good in terms of depth, it helps to imagine what parts should be closer to an eye, which should be further.
Overall - Can't really see much of render blending, since those are just C4D effects on top of the focal, color scheme is also a bummer here, I mean the main focal (render) is blue and you used brown-ish effects and BG, however, I do like your idea to draw out Sonic's claws with C4D effects.
Sorry if I seem too harsh :/
If anyone else wants some feedback as provided ^ above, please let me know
If anyone is ever displeased with the outcome or is simply curious, I would be happy to give you an explanation behind your score or lack thereof.
k
This one may end up being temporary.. but this is my current entry.
lel
Great entries, Kane & Matrix!